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Mizieya's avatar

wow what a deliciously dark chapter! full of suspense. I really loved the images so thorough and convincing such a lot of time and energy clearly went into the conceptualisation of the news clipping obituary, the forum, etc really amazing to look at. the banter between the three women poor Sarah being teased lol.

I especially liked the part where Elllie kinda looses control over her shadow who tries to consume the infected victim. The shadow reacting out of fear. it’s something she’s going to have to contend with because up until now she and her shadow had been working in tandem.

Graveglass is a scary new drug. the thing is one can see something like the happening in real life a drug that brings out the shadow. experiment on the population not because of why not but because one can. But the way you portrayed the drug in action, was gripping the first victim the women come across I could see the scene clearly in my head tbh the chapter is very visual and when one is reading it the images come to life. So you’re there with the characters. Poor Mr Doyle.

Maxwell the nemesis of Sebastian. but one wonders who is he working for because hes not the brains behind the outfit hes a foot soldier. thanks for portraying Miz as the Gentleman Gangster I quite enjoyed him. I think the touching part about Miz is his relationship with the Glaswegian downtown dwellers. he knows the community and they know him. - all walks of life. and the placement of the music fits smoothly..

I really enjoyed this chapter, its flawless/ I cant get the images out of my head, they are definately staying with. me

Mikey Clarke's avatar

Whoanelly. The graffiti war on that wall is a brilliant bit of world building. It says more about the state of Downtown than three paragraphs of exposition ever could. And Miz himself is shaping up to be properly magnetic. Calm menace wrapped in decent manners. More of him please.

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